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Josh Louis's avatar

Love your description of the Shadow Marsh and all the nasty beasties found within. Cool stuff!

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Belte's avatar

Great use of personally loyalty and high stakes. Twice I didn’t know if the party would be able to overcome the threats. One aspect that I might adjust is having a bit of backstory on why Heirune would consider selling her body to support her friend. It felt abrupt. Perhaps having Heirune be affected in some way from the witch’s evil power that corrupts her to a degree. Otherwise, it was a fun read and I hope you can make these stories into a book!

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