In this special Mage Hunter short story, our priestess, Heirune, battles a shadow witch to save her friend, accursed by a demon that keeps returning like a cancer. Join her and her adventurers as they face dark magic, spirits, and mutated beasts in a thrilling, faith-fueled battle. Will light prevail? Will Heirune’s patience and faith pay off?
Great use of personally loyalty and high stakes. Twice I didn’t know if the party would be able to overcome the threats. One aspect that I might adjust is having a bit of backstory on why Heirune would consider selling her body to support her friend. It felt abrupt. Perhaps having Heirune be affected in some way from the witch’s evil power that corrupts her to a degree. Otherwise, it was a fun read and I hope you can make these stories into a book!
Love your description of the Shadow Marsh and all the nasty beasties found within. Cool stuff!
Thank you for reading. I’m so glad you enjoyed my story!
Great use of personally loyalty and high stakes. Twice I didn’t know if the party would be able to overcome the threats. One aspect that I might adjust is having a bit of backstory on why Heirune would consider selling her body to support her friend. It felt abrupt. Perhaps having Heirune be affected in some way from the witch’s evil power that corrupts her to a degree. Otherwise, it was a fun read and I hope you can make these stories into a book!